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winter jasmine

vibrant yellow shrub pops against black wedding dress love is forever sunset cries anew for new lovers while they dance love is immortal snow falls at banquet holding hands at the marriage love everlasting her lips taste so pure forsaken from the near truth love will be always the shrubs run sideways hugs are just as important love is my dear friend

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2025 8:26:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write yet again. This one is a real winner. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Ink Empress

Date: 2/4/2025 7:02:00 AM

Dear Robert James L, this is so beautiful and i wouldnt have even noticed that youv written a string of senryus because of the seamless flow of one senryu to another and how youv maintained a very captivating cadence as well as how descriptive and heartfelt it is! I love the wintry imagery and also how every senryu ends with a line that depicts true love and eternal promises! Yes love will be always when it is true , and i must say you write on this subject and your use of the prompt is beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest! Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2025 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful write. A pretty picture you have here with your words. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away...................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/27/2025 6:47:00 PM

yellow shrub, black wedding dress…unusual imagery!

Robert James Liguori
Date: 1/27/2025 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Kim. I felt it was interesting too!