Thabang Ngoma Poet Rhyme

Winter In the African Sun

Winter in the African sun
Feels like sizzling summer fun
Come down to Durban beach
And all your blues will be bleached
This is South Africa’s playground
We have a golden tan all year-round


05-08-2015
Thabang Jan Ngoma

Sponsor: SKAT A 
Contest Name: The Answer (in less than 7 lines)

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Teddy Kimathi August 28, 2015 at 12:08 PM The imagery in your piece arrests a moment of awe like a photo. Congrats to your wonderful WIN Thabang! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 9:03 PM oh you really make me want to be there!!Love this one. Thabang Ngoma August 19, 2015 at 11:47 PM Morning Andrea...I guess this does sound more like a promo than an actual poem lol..(:heers, Tbang

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:20 PM Thabang. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 5, 2015 at 2:31 AM Thabang, such great lines vivid with delightful imagery!~Olive Eloisa =') Thabang Ngoma August 5, 2015 at 5:02 PM Hi Olive..thank you so much, glad you like it (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison August 4, 2015 at 5:23 PM Lovely imagery Thabang good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Thabang Ngoma August 4, 2015 at 6:31 PM Evening Jan...thanks lots, Tbang