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Winter In Miami

Wake up to the 60's in Miami, northern folks praying for the sun Ice-cold winds cutting, bundle up like it’s a blizzard snowbirds make fun Nip of Cuban coffee to stay warm, sit around the fire to warm our hands The frosty chill of a winter night, decide to run along the beach sands Evening walks on lincoln road on south beach icy breeze blowing Runny nose, watery eyes as the whipping wind flowing Icy cold mornings, hot afternoons chill evening flows Northern snowbirds travel to Miami to escape blast of snows Miami an international city with a short winter season In depth of holidays flip-flops, shorts, bikinis; sunscreen is the reason A sweater and shorts complete a chilly night Miami skyline on a winter night is breathless in its own right International cuisine dinner on south beach while cool tropical evening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/11/2017 10:20:00 PM
This was a nice write :) I enjoyed it greatly
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Date: 5/25/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thank you I'm humbled you really enjoyed
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Date: 5/25/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you I'm humbled you really enjoyed
Date: 2/18/2017 12:32:00 PM
begins to wish i was there when the eastern wind whistles past my door
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 3/6/2017 10:45:00 PM
I know the weather here in Miami is great... God bless
Date: 2/12/2017 8:28:00 AM
Nice poem Patrice :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Heidi glad you enjoyed my poem
Date: 1/14/2017 12:59:00 PM
You should take me on tour when maybe thinking of visiting Miami... Cool Poem ~phatt P.S. haaaaaappy New Year!
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Date: 1/14/2017 1:06:00 PM
Sure I don't have problem doing so just let me know love... Happy New Year... God bless
Date: 1/4/2017 10:08:00 AM
Hi Patrice, I'm with Silent, it doesn't seem much like Winter to me. Great acrostic and it has fun vibe to it. Well done. :-) Alexis PS, Happy New Years to you and your loved ones
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/6/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Alexis Happy new year love to you and your family.... God bless
Date: 1/1/2017 4:25:00 PM
It can't be TOO cold, compared to UTAH. GREAT job with your acrostic for this fun contest, Patrice.
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 1/2/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thank you Andrea I don't mean to brag but its been warm here... But Im glad you enjoyed my poem... God bless Happy New Year
Date: 12/28/2016 4:25:00 PM
A beautiful painting. Although, I've not been to Miami, you've taken me there to see the icy colds through the well crafted lines. Well penned, Patrice.
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/28/2016 7:12:00 PM
Awww... Thank you Adeniji... I'm glad you enjoyed my poem... God bless

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