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Winter Heart

You fell into my arms and i saw you melt like a snow flake but poisonuos as snake. You freeze the time like winter breeze shining like a dime and falling in my kiss. You have a stone heart like ice captured in your chest ever since the start you were building by me a nest. Your eyes are like reflection of the melted snow and sun i can't deny perfection i can't deny the stun. Your lips are red as dawn sweet as Finnish liqorice please, be never gone don't take away the worlds prestige. Like a figure of your speech your special cheeks are gold you're someone I can reach but before your heart is sold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/10/2017 5:19:00 AM
There are far to many poems here "Lana" with no comments at all - you deserve so much better - there is a great poet inside of you and I hope one day your works receive the real recognition they so duly deserve - Indiana x x x
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Date: 9/13/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thank you very much.. I just didn't know what to say once I've read this. I'm really thankfull for your comment, it inspired me to write even more.. That was so nice of you, I feel like I don't deserve it.. :)

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