Winter Heart

You fell into my arms
and i saw you melt 
like a snow flake 
but poisonuos as snake.

You freeze the time
like winter breeze
shining like a dime
and falling in my kiss.

You have a stone heart
like ice captured in your chest
ever since the start
you were building by me a nest.

Your eyes are like reflection
of the melted snow and sun
i can't deny perfection
i can't deny the stun.

Your lips are red as dawn
sweet as Finnish liqorice
please, be never gone
don't take away the worlds prestige.

Like a figure of your speech
your special cheeks are gold
you're someone I can reach
but before your heart is sold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/10/2017 5:19:00 AM
There are far to many poems here "Lana" with no comments at all - you deserve so much better - there is a great poet inside of you and I hope one day your works receive the real recognition they so duly deserve - Indiana x x x
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Date: 9/13/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thank you very much.. I just didn't know what to say once I've read this. I'm really thankfull for your comment, it inspired me to write even more.. That was so nice of you, I feel like I don't deserve it.. :)
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