Winter Haiku 3

Dawn-- still the cold stings, 
People had a trembling sleep, 
Hark!  The church-bell rings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:28 PM
A suggestive haiku....after the cold night, the church bell rings in a new day and the possibility of warm sunshine. // paul
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Yes, Paul. You have correctly interpreted it. Thank you.
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September 10, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Hi, and welcome to Soup. I like this one and it makes me want to see the other two!
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September 10, 2016 at 2:14 PM
I really appreciate your friendly visits, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 2:29 AM
There is lovely imagery in your haiku. I see you are new...let me wish you a warm welcome to Poetry Soup Sarban. Aloha, Connie ; )
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:30 AM
Thank you , Connie. :)
Turner Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:45 AM
I don't know much about haiku but this one seems to make sense to me, Sarban:)
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Thanks my dear friend.
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