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Winter Haiku 3

Dawn-- still the cold stings, People had a trembling sleep, Hark! The church-bell rings.

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/13/2016 12:28:00 PM

A suggestive haiku....after the cold night, the church bell rings in a new day and the possibility of warm sunshine. // paul

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/13/2016 12:35:00 PM

Yes, Paul. You have correctly interpreted it. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2016 10:21:00 AM

Hi, and welcome to Soup. I like this one and it makes me want to see the other two!

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/10/2016 2:14:00 PM

I really appreciate your friendly visits, Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/10/2016 2:29:00 AM

There is lovely imagery in your haiku. I see you are new...let me wish you a warm welcome to Poetry Soup Sarban. Aloha, Connie ; )

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/10/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thank you , Connie. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/8/2016 7:45:00 AM

I don't know much about haiku but this one seems to make sense to me, Sarban:)

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/13/2016 12:36:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend.