Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Winter Foolishness

wrapped in cloths I watched
shedding everything she stood -
foolish winter tree







Won third place in STRAND SPECIAL 10 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Kai Michael Neumann December 30, 2019 at 4:41 AM Very nice. And then there was spring ... Jenish Somadas December 30, 2019 at 5:24 AM Yeah.. Then only she will dress up.. Thank you..

Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 11:35 PM Interesting contrast. I'd never thought of it that way before. We bundle up more while the trees bare all. Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 11:47 PM I also never thought it before I watched that tree.. Thank you for your comment..

Gershon Wolf December 29, 2019 at 11:00 AM Nice juxtaposition there, my friend. ~ Brrrr. :) gw Jenish Somadas December 29, 2019 at 11:13 PM Thank you Gershon..

Eve Roper December 26, 2019 at 7:09 PM this is beautiful discerption, Jenish. Jenish Somadas December 26, 2019 at 10:37 PM Thank you Eve..