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Winter Fog

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Damp cold fog rolls through the opening in hedge
                                     
                                                      like a Coke shaken pouring

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Stephen Parker

November 30, 2010 at 12:11 PM

Shaken and poured! I can see the misty fizz emanating from your Coke can! Good, vivid imagery! Keep the imagination percolating!

Mari Sloan

November 26, 2010 at 12:49 AM

:-) It's good to see you, too, Sara. I'm very familiar with the fizz of shaken Coke, and Southern hedges.

Anthony Nutter

November 25, 2010 at 3:56 AM

Excellent vivid metaphor. Nice piece.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

November 25, 2010 at 3:50 AM

Thnx Sara for visiting my work "Emptiness camouflaging along with feelings " and leaving encouraging comments.... ....Luv/best wishes..... Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 24, 2010 at 4:14 PM

Happy thanksgiving day, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2010 at 11:36 AM

Giving you thanks for sharing your poetry here at PoetrySoup. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours Sara. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

November 24, 2010 at 11:21 AM

Awesome description of fog, Sara, in your excellent monoku. Best wishes for a wonderful Thanksgiving. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

November 24, 2010 at 6:33 AM

Interesting metaphor here, Sara. Beautifully written. Have a great holiday! Dan C

Nette Onclaud

November 24, 2010 at 4:35 AM

how descriptive this can get with a charming ending.. shhh, i'm a coke addict, sara... thanks for visiting my pace with huugs ofr you.. warmst, nette

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2010 at 7:01 PM

You mean when you shake it and it foams and sprays out. I can see that, SAra. Nicely done. WE are expecting blizzard tonight. I got a phone call from the city to keep streets clear for snow removal! EEEK LUv, Andrea