Winter Dreams

morning~
again no snow 
to soften her nightly
dreams of a forever childhood 
long gone

agechildhoodcinquain

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CC Bloom

January 12, 2026 at 7:30 PM

You are an extraordinary poet and I am glad I discovered your work here. Thank you

Chetta Achara

January 12, 2026 at 10:48 PM

Thank you. I am an okay poet. I’ve been writing for a long time. I still feel like a novice.

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2026 at 5:37 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Chetta Achara

January 12, 2026 at 7:09 AM

Thank you.

Sam Kauffman

January 8, 2026 at 11:51 AM

Chetta, congratulations on your trophy win! There is such a sense of poignant longing in your words and the desire to recapture a treasured childhood. Blessings to you!

Chetta Achara

January 8, 2026 at 1:38 PM

Thank you.