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Winter Dreams

winter dreams


                                         winter branches
                                    blanketed in snowy lace
                                     dreaming of the spring












for:Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Jan. 16, 2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/30/2022 7:08:00 AM

beautiful ~ love it ~

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 7/30/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thanks for the compliment~glad you enjoyed it. Winter will be here before we know it. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/15/2022 7:51:00 AM

A beautiful haiku. Few words with a pretty story told. Have a blessed day............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/2/2022 7:40:00 AM

Pretty haiku, lovely image..Delice

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/25/2022 3:44:00 PM

Brilliant Haiku, Paulette. To me, in mid of winter, covered with "snowy lace" trees dream of Spring. Love and blessings ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2022 2:14:00 AM

A gem of a poem, Paulette. My few orchids dream of summer unless this cold kills them.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/17/2022 11:17:00 AM

Orchids are so lovely, my husband seems to have a knack for them. He takes my spent ones and brings them back to life. I imagine the sunlight at his place of business revives them back to life. Thanks for stopping by to comment~and good luck with your orchids. Blessings, Paulette

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/16/2022 10:25:00 PM

Yes Paulette, trees dream...an old woodsman once taught me to gently approach a tree that summons me, softly reach out and touch all my fingers to the bark, close my eyes & listen, a favorite ritual...great 'ku my friend...

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/17/2022 11:14:00 AM

Hi Jim, Glad you enjoyed my Haiku~I am enjoying your mystical and sensitive approach to nature! Trees, plants, jazz and sunlight ~ a fulfilling life. :)Paulette

James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/16/2022 10:48:00 PM

As you can imagine Paulette, I am roommates with 22 houseplants, each of varied temperament, but all prefer free-jazz & sunlight!