Winter Dormancy, Death, and Deliverance

The year long in the tooth, the crops have been gathered;
Forests’ autumn cloak lies mostly torn and tattered.
Cool fall evenings replaced by the late season gust;
Winter steals in as a cold betrayer of trust.

Slowly, yet steadily, the mercury recedes;
Dormant grass more fortunate than the dying reeds.
Geese leave the fields, heading south for another;
Water frozen like its terrestrial brother.

Then the snow descends upon us in a fury!
Sunlight not penetrating skies gray and dreary.
Wind-swept snow reshaped like dunes on a beach;
The warm allure of summer now seems far from reach.

Sub-zero cold arrives with its dangerous bite;
Giving pause to travelers, especially at night.
Sidewalks and drives shoveled, we seek shelter indoors;
Hot chocolate and marshmallows are winter’s s’mores.

Month after month we tire of the polar vortex;
With sad folks, burst pipes, and winterkill, among its effects.
Deer and wildlife who couldn’t escape its icy snare;
Lay where they fell, a caution to others who may dare.

Inside we hunker down while the sun is just a glint;
While outside signs of deliverance give us a hint.
Dripping icicles signal water starting to flow;
And remind us of the life buried beneath the snow.

Ice dropping from trees shows winter melting away;
Anglers and kids enjoy final days of ice play.
Winter’s part of the cycle of everything;
Its waning days beckoning the promise of spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Hello Bartholomew William, So nice to meet you. This is a wonderful poem about winter. It is winter where i live. it came dearly this year. Looks so beautiful with the Christmas outdoors light lit. enjkoy youtr evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Hello Bartholomew, You are welcome. Hi ! Thank you i will have a great week. i wishthew same for you. As for winter, it is not my fav. season. /Darlenme/
Williams Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:36 AM
Thanks again, Darlene, and all my very best to you! Bartholomew
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Hello Bartholomes Williams, It is nice to meet you. You are very welcome. I am glad I made your day brighter. I look forward to your visit. You also have a great week/. All the best. /Darlene/
Williams Avatar
December 8, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Hi, Darlene, and thank you so very much for stopping by to read and comment on my poem! I appreciate your kind words and personal reflection. I will stop by and read some of your poems in the near future. Have a great week - and winter!! Very best, Bartholomew :)
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