Connie Marcum Wong Poet Rhyme

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Winter Divinity

First snow on tree tops,
Canadian pristine . . .
Nature's own beauty
Of spirit supreme.

Cascading waters
Of crystal clear birth
Instill serene pleasure
From heaven to earth.

As the lake mirrors mountains
And deep azure sky,
We commune together,
My God and I.

© Connie Marcum Wong

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Cona Adams February 2, 2015 at 9:22 AM Love this, Connie. Yes, the beauty of the world He gave does transport us into his presence, and cause us to worship. Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2015 at 11:23 AM Snow storms are another story, watching the news, I really feel for folks struck by the storms. But fresh fallen snow in sunny weather is heavenly. Thanks very much Cona. Blessings, Connie

Cona Adams January 21, 2015 at 11:47 AM Brought back memories, Connie. Canada is a beautiful country, and we were totally impressed with its beauty. An inspiring write, this. Connie Marcum Wong January 22, 2015 at 5:55 PM Thank you Cona. Canada does have wondrous beauty.

Arlene Smith January 20, 2015 at 4:37 AM Truly divine, Connie.. Absolutely stunning, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene Connie Marcum Wong January 20, 2015 at 1:47 PM Thank you so much Arlene. I could sit here all day and read poetry from this talented group at Soup, but I have obligations. Hugs, Connie

Hamida Yamin January 19, 2015 at 1:03 PM Hi Connie! An enchanting poem -beautiful picturization of winter in Canada. A topnotcher. -Hamida

Robert Lindley January 13, 2015 at 10:09 AM Super 7 my friend. This write flows like a sweet dream. A testament to your spiritual alertness and poetic talent! Always pleasing to see the appreciation of God and the majestic beauty in the planet he created. Bravoooooooo!!!!!!!! Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2015 at 7:37 PM Oh, thank you very much Robert. We all need to take care of our planet. Blessings, Connie

Monterey Sirak January 7, 2015 at 7:54 AM Lovely! The grandeur of nature does seem to make God feel closer. Connie Marcum Wong January 7, 2015 at 9:19 PM Thank you Monterey. Nature has become my church.

Jerry T Curtis January 7, 2015 at 7:37 AM Beautiful flow and magnificent content, I am drawn to poems short and to the point. Connie Marcum Wong January 7, 2015 at 9:17 PM Me too. Thank you Jerry!

Daver Austin January 6, 2015 at 8:43 AM I especially like the last four lines. The image is great. Love, Dave Connie Marcum Wong January 7, 2015 at 9:16 PM Thank you Daver. Hugs, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:29 AM I agree Tim. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie

Timothy Hicks January 4, 2015 at 8:47 PM There is a feeling of solitude and divinity in the winter, and you captured it very well. God's voice seems all the clearer away from the noises of the city. Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:30 AM I agree Tim. Thank you very much. Blessings, Connie

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2015 at 1:26 AM Divine , connie, I love how you brought the communion with your God into the ending of it. short and sweet, just how I like them!! Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 2:34 AM Thank you Andrea. I enjoy shorter poems too. They can be as memorable as longer poems. Hugs, Connie

M. L. Kiser December 31, 2014 at 3:25 PM A divine write...I'm sure that winter would be flattered. Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 2:36 AM How sweet M.L. Thank you very much. Hugs, Connie

John Fleming December 31, 2014 at 3:24 PM A beautiful little poem! Compact and concise...lovely!! :) john. Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 2:37 AM Thank you John. I appreciate your kind comment. Aloha, Connie

Jan Allison December 31, 2014 at 3:03 PM this is simply stunning Connie a wonderful picture and stunning imagery:-) A 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 31, 2014 at 2:36 PM Beautiful poem...lovely imagery...inspired ending! Well done Connie; great poem to end the year with! All the best. // paul