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Winter Dawn Splendor

pale glimmering sun
naked trees shivering bare
many hued songbirds



November 4, 2019
A Late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:12 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Thank you for those warm congratulations, Caren!
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Congrats on your top win, Evelyn. Well done.
Buehler Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:30 AM
That's very gratifying, Line. Blessings, Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 8:09 PM
You painted such a nice contrast between the barren and the colorful in this haiku, Evelyn. Congrats on a richly-deserved winner in Tania's contest! Warm wishes, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Gershon, I am so pleased that you found my haiku to be vividly contrasting. Thank you for your appreciation and for your kind congratulations! Warm wishes to you, Evelyn
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Lovely imagery Evelyn, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 6:43 PM
I am so very glad you think so, Jan. Thank you for your warm thoughts :-) xx
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November 8, 2019 at 8:10 AM
This is wonderful! My favourite that I've seen for this contest. Congratulations on your top win! xomo
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Thank you for that touching sentiment, Maureen. I'm deeply honored. Thank you for your congratulations as well. xomo
Andresen Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 4:42 AM
- A good one, Evelyn :) Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2019 at 12:14 PM
I am glad you liked it, Anne Lise! Thank you for your congratulations, and hugs to you, too. :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:44 PM
very pretty picture, Evelyn. Congrats for the win
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thank you for those heartwarming words, Andrea. :)
Messina Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Very nice imagery, Evelyn. Congratulations on your top win. ~Charlie
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:38 PM
I thank you so much, Charles, for your very nice words and also your congratulations. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Pretty visual! Congratulations, Evelyn!
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:38 PM
My heartfelt thanks to you, Kim! :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Evelyn congratulations on your top placement in the contest with your beautifully penned haiku!
Buehler Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Tania, I am deeply honored and so happy for my placement! Thank you so much for your kind words and for this honor.
Labyrinth Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Divine..."naked trees shivering bare...".
Buehler Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Many thanks, Leanne! :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 8:09 PM
Lovely imagery, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Thank you so much, Line. :)
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