Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Winter Commute

The train was stuck;
The tracks were icy.
Weather cold;
Conditions dicey.

Stops and starts
Made travel slow.
Patience was
The way to go.

Home at last,
Relieved but spent
And wond'ring where
The hours went.

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Trevor Mcleod February 3, 2015 at 2:05 PM Well crafted Ilene. It shows great control.

Robert Johnson February 2, 2015 at 10:14 PM Well I hope you wrote this poem during this time. That would have made you almost grateful for the whole ordeal. Peace. :)