Winter chose to slumber

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In this endless false fall, a summer sun fell down Off the flattest edge of the planet, outside of town Ice grew slowly over every part of this lumber The world at full unrest; winter chose to slumber

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/9/2024 12:12:00 PM

Gorgeous writing, A.S.! A new take I have never seen before on Winter... my cap off to you, gifted friend!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/9/2024 10:53:00 PM

It has been a strange winter in Minnesota almost no snow and very little Sub-Zero days. The picture attached to this poem is actually of the trees in my backyard. Approximately 2 weeks before the poem was written. I appreciate your kind words. A.S.