Winter Cataract

Crystals flowing down
Mother of milk excretions
White conceal blended
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2010 at 10:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Cecil. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2010 at 8:34 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 23, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Oh, I love the blurred images of a winter cataract! Great work! and Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie
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February 23, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Interesting ideas that you have penned in this one. If it is for the contest, good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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