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Winter Bride

ice sheen sighs, frosty sense bright clean frosty sand dunes drifted high white strand tidal pools, frost murmur bridal Copyright, November 29, 2014 Faye Gibson

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Date: 12/7/2014 10:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in white, Faye! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:32:00 PM
I just love the white bridal imagery, Faye. I think if you had rhymed that middle part, it would have gotten scored higher. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Faye!
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Date: 12/4/2014 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Faye!
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Date: 12/3/2014 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Faye on your win!
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Faye, on your win! Much imagery in so few words. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/3/2014 11:21:00 AM
Like your take, Faye....those white strands of snow seem to flow behind your winter bride in romantic attire. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:36:00 AM
laced with words making winter look like a bride, faye... great effort here..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this winter wonderland Faye.
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:35:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:52:00 PM
beautifully penned Faye good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 1:28:00 PM
The muse was nice wasn't he/she?..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:48:00 PM
love the beauty and brevity of these wonderful images.
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