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Winter Bride

ice sheen
sighs, frosty sense
bright clean

frosty sand
dunes drifted high
white strand

tidal
pools, frost murmur
bridal

Copyright, November 29, 2014
Faye Gibson

Copyright © Faye Gibson | Year Posted 2014

seasnowwinterverse

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

December 7, 2014 at 10:43 PM

Beautiful imagery in white, Faye! Congrats to you...hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2014 at 7:32 PM

I just love the white bridal imagery, Faye. I think if you had rhymed that middle part, it would have gotten scored higher. Congrats on the winners' list.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 4, 2014 at 4:48 AM

Congrats on ur winning awesome write Faye!

Hija De La Luna

December 4, 2014 at 3:12 AM

Congratulations, Faye!

December 3, 2014 at 6:57 PM

Congratulations Faye on your win!

December 3, 2014 at 3:16 PM

Congratulations, Faye, on your win! Much imagery in so few words. Hugs, Sandra

December 3, 2014 at 11:21 AM

Like your take, Faye....those white strands of snow seem to flow behind your winter bride in romantic attire. Congrats on your fine win. // paul

December 3, 2014 at 10:36 AM

laced with words making winter look like a bride, faye... great effort here..thanks for being part of my contest with shining congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 3, 2014 at 9:59 AM

Congratulations on your win with this winter wonderland Faye.

December 3, 2014 at 9:35 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 28, 2014 at 4:52 PM

beautifully penned Faye good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

November 28, 2014 at 1:28 PM

The muse was nice wasn't he/she?..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit..Sara

November 28, 2014 at 12:48 PM

love the beauty and brevity of these wonderful images.

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