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Winter Blue

On a crisp clear morning, the sky is deeply blue,
And in the distance I can see, blue mountains too.
Blue jay is in the tree, powdery snow everywhere-
The sky is in the lake, frosty clouds in the air!
The sun lavishes lemon rays, never quite outdone,
While Uranus and Neptune, waltz afar from the sun.


Written on 6/7/2021
For: Bite Size Poem no.5 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brown  Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Beautiful imagery of a beautiful poem! <3
Buehler Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely thoughts, Riquetta. Blessings and hugs.
Laurie Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:52 PM
Hello Evelyn … a lovely painting with words to capture natural beauty - thank you Evelyn - Lindsay
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 5:00 PM
You are most welcome, Lindsay. Thank you for your valuable comment. Evelyn
Y. Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Wow! Evelyn, You painted such a lovely breathtaking picture with words. I loved the view. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-)Alexis
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Thank you Alexis, for sharing your appreciation of this poem with me. As you know, readers are a big reason writers write. Thanks again for the smiles, and do enjoy your evening. :) Evelyn
Ball Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:20 PM
So beautifully written and well described with such wonderful imagery. Evelyn whether it wins or not it wins with me. Well Done. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:32 PM
That is so nice to know, Judy. Thank you so much for your warm words of support. Have a lovely evening, my friend, Evelyn
Daniel Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:38 AM
WOW! This is sure to win, Evelyn, brilliantly beautiful:)
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Thank you, Jo. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 11:30 PM
We must bear all that the seasons offer us. They have their use. Without winter we can have no summer. Hugs.
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Thank you for the joy of your thoughtful comment. Hugs. :)
Poet Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 7:57 PM
This poem is so poignant. I like it, with it... there are truly so many things to be happy about in life. The atmosphere inspired you to write a wonderful poem. Best wishes for a win, blessings, and best regards, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 8:39 PM
That is truly inspiring, Lasaad. Thank you for your lovely comment. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Mmm...hmm...hmm...humming along!
Buehler Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 8:36 PM
So glad you like the melody, Kim. :D
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