Winter

Whiteness falling whirling white in the crisp hushed winter's bite. Nipping flakes light the dark night that gathers on window pane. Evening's moon begin to wane, relaxing by candlelight. 9/4/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/6/2017 2:13:00 PM

You gave due thought to this acrostic, Eve, enhanced by lovely imagery, alliteration, rhyme and 7syllable lines. Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2017 8:42:00 AM

Nice acrostic Eve..

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/6/2017 6:54:00 AM

Beautifully rhythmic, Eve... Read and read again ... Thank you for your kind compliments which I feel I don't deserve ...

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2017 10:21:00 AM

Very nice acrostic Eve..

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:58:00 PM

Thank you ,Joseph, Hugs Eve ~`*.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/5/2017 9:12:00 AM

I am starting to celebrate a very different change of season, but you do give a warm, romantic feel to the depths of winter. I'm almost jealous.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:57:00 PM

Thank you very much for the compliment , Scott, Hugs Eve ~`*.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/5/2017 8:39:00 AM

Very loverly... Thanks for the reminder — I'm heading south! ~ john

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:57:00 PM

Sorry, John, I had to remind you,, better than all that rain we had, Hugs Eve ~`*.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/5/2017 8:36:00 AM

Terrific Eve...I'm just hoping it takes it's time getting here.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:55:00 PM

Tim, thank you ... I hope so too Hugs Eve ~`*.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/5/2017 8:20:00 AM

A wintery Acrostic Eve...very chilly done...best of luck my friend...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:54:00 PM

Thank you very much for the compliment and the good luck ,^WW^, Hugs Eve ~`*.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/5/2017 7:48:00 AM

Beautiful, Eve Your words perfectly evoke splendid memories!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:53:00 PM

Thank you very much ,Mike , Hugs Eve ~`*.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/5/2017 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful winter imagery-a lovely poem, Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:53:00 PM

Thank you very much ,Vijay, Hugs Eve ~`*.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2017 5:59:00 AM

Wow, this brings me into the mood of winter! Though I'm not ready for winter just yet, I want Autumn to come first, but this poem surely brightens up what winter brings with it! I really enjoyed reading your incredible poem this morning! You have enlightened me by your delightful way you have written this amazing piece, Great Work my friend!!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:52:00 PM

Thank you very much for your inspirational compliment, Russell; you are an amazing person...Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2017 3:11:00 AM

Lovely alliteration and imagery eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 9/5/2017 10:50:00 PM

Thank you very much ,Jan, Hugs Eve ~`*