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As heavy frost settles 'pon the brown hill And floats down to the level, thoughts are stilled Words rise up to nettle but spirits thrill Winter's north breeze meddles_ spring's buds to kill Japanese Magnolia's buds wait until spring's warm rains flood the earth; then sap buds fill. Winter's pause, earth lauds rebirth, and birds' shrill Vexing cold squads stay away and be still At spring's rebirth be awed, winter's cold distill Death where is resurrection's applaud, still Waiting for spring's hallowed birth, rapture's real Transformation follows, one's fate sealed Not part of the poem: There is a powerful difference in having to say something and having something to say!! Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Contest: Interlocking Rhyme Written: January 19,2015 Finis'

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Date: 2/15/2015 10:17:00 AM
Sara This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:39:00 AM
Superb write Sara! Congrats on ur fine win!
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Date: 2/2/2015 8:48:00 PM
SO beautiful, Sara...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Sara, very descriptive. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:27:00 PM
such outstanding imagery Sara - i love your powerful comment at the end! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:41:00 PM
Its there Sara, well done I say..'
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
I find this to be an amazing piece! Giving this a super 7 but it deserves a golden ten! This is a winner without a doubt. Adding this gem to my fav list my friend. And pm on the way.. Thanks
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Date: 1/21/2015 4:51:00 AM
- A amazing poem Sara - Have a lovely day :) - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:11:00 PM
A magnificently written poem.
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:23:00 AM
wow Sara, this is powerful poetry...
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Date: 1/19/2015 8:28:00 PM
Clapping for you, dear friend.... Outstanding!!... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/19/2015 1:48:00 PM
It is a brilliant write, Sara -an enchanting rhyming poem picturising winter. I simply could not resist reading it a number of times to have a feel of the contents. Regards. -Hamida
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Date: 1/19/2015 9:57:00 AM
a major work highlighting seasons' vignettes through your vivid wordplay, sara... love the interlocking rhyme scheme.. huggs
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