Notes About The Poem

Winter

As heavy frost settles 'pon the brown hill
And floats down to the level, thoughts are stilled
Words rise up to nettle but spirits thrill
Winter's north breeze meddles_ spring's buds to kill

Japanese Magnolia's buds wait until
spring's warm rains flood the earth; then sap buds fill.
Winter's pause, earth lauds rebirth, and birds' shrill
Vexing cold squads stay away and be still

At spring's rebirth be awed, winter's cold distill
Death where is resurrection's applaud, still
Waiting for spring's hallowed birth, rapture's real
Transformation follows, one's fate sealed

Not part of the poem:
There is a powerful difference in having to say something
and having something to say!!

Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
Contest: Interlocking Rhyme
Written: January 19,2015

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2015 at 10:17 AM
Sara This is a sweet lovely win. *Skat LOVE*
A. Sharma Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 4:39 AM
Superb write Sara! Congrats on ur fine win!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 8:48 PM
SO beautiful, Sara...congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
Roper Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Sara, very descriptive. Blessings Eve
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 12:27 PM
such outstanding imagery Sara - i love your powerful comment at the end! Hugs jan xx
Maverick Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 12:41 PM
Its there Sara, well done I say..'
Lindley Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 7:53 AM
I find this to be an amazing piece! Giving this a super 7 but it deserves a golden ten! This is a winner without a doubt. Adding this gem to my fav list my friend. And pm on the way.. Thanks
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 4:51 AM
- A amazing poem Sara - Have a lovely day :) - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 2:11 PM
A magnificently written poem.
Horsman Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 10:23 AM
wow Sara, this is powerful poetry...
Smith Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Clapping for you, dear friend.... Outstanding!!... Hugs.. Arlene
Yamin Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 1:48 PM
It is a brilliant write, Sara -an enchanting rhyming poem picturising winter. I simply could not resist reading it a number of times to have a feel of the contents. Regards. -Hamida
Onclaud Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 9:57 AM
a major work highlighting seasons' vignettes through your vivid wordplay, sara... love the interlocking rhyme scheme.. huggs
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