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09~29~14
Contest: Seasonal Acrostics
Sponsor Charlotte Puddifoot

 

Contest Simply Beautiful Kelly Deschler
~awarded 5th place~</center>

Winds whisper secrets with icy lips
Icicles hang like fingers from skeletal trees
New blanket of snow sparkles like tiny diamonds
Tiny snowflakes fall like confetti from heaven
Everywhere the eye can see is painted a brilliant white
Romantic roaring fire removes the icy chill

09~29~14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/16/2016 7:30:00 PM
:) anytime
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Date: 1/16/2016 7:09:00 PM
Jan, thank you for the nice reply to my comment
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/16/2016 7:13:00 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/15/2016 10:20:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 1/16/2016 3:03:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2016 8:08:00 AM
Jan, congratulations on the win! :)
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/11/2016 3:37:00 PM
Excellent write....thrilling with a surprise ending.....
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Judy it is quite an old poem I am so pleased to get a chance to show it again:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/10/2016 2:19:00 PM
Many congrats on your acrostic win JAN! From Jean
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Date: 1/10/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 8:33:00 PM
A great acrostic, Jan! A beautiful description of winter! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/10/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 5:43:00 PM
congrats on your placement Jan
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Date: 1/9/2016 5:47:00 PM
Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 4:05:00 PM
Gorgeous, Jan, wonderful imagery. Every time I read it a different line jumps out at me.
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thanks James I had only been writing for 7 months when I wrote this - I look back over my poetry journey and am amazed how far I have come - still having fun and learning all the time that is the most important thing to me:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 3:48:00 PM
Jan, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 7:34:00 AM
Nice images of winter, Jan. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 4:50:00 AM
Congrats Jan on your imagery and win!
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 2:48:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and picture you've created in our minds Jan! Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/9/2016 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2016 11:21:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2016 11:13:00 PM
This entry is stunningly beautiful Jan. Congratulations on your placement!
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2016 10:58:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/8/2016 9:05:00 PM
Jan, without a doubt, you entered your VERY BEST in this contest. Your imagery was off the hook!! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/9/2016 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I do try really hard with my imagery :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/12/2015 3:48:00 AM
:) Anytime Jan... Goodnight
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:50:00 AM
Its 9.50 am here lol:-)xx
Date: 4/12/2015 3:13:00 AM
Jan, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 4/7/2015 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan! Hugs, Julia, xx
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Date: 4/7/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Julia:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/6/2015 11:00:00 AM
Jan, such a beautiful Acrostic about Winter that images its sparkling and brilliant white beauty. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2015 11:01:00 AM
thanks so much Sandra - i need to catch up on the contest commenting but that stops me reading the new poems - grr so little time! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/6/2015 9:54:00 AM
An amazing write. Congratulations on your win! Excellent, added to my list!
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Date: 4/6/2015 9:55:00 AM
Thanks so much my lovely friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/5/2015 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful write Jan...congrats on the win
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Date: 4/6/2015 4:07:00 AM
Thanks Joseph you are always so supportive:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 4/5/2015 8:43:00 PM
Winter can be a frightening time, but also very heartwarming and beautiful. Just like your poem, Jan! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/6/2015 4:07:00 AM
Thanks Kelly I am really pleased with my placement and the chance to showcase an older poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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