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09~29~14
Contest: Seasonal Acrostics
Sponsor Charlotte Puddifoot

 

Contest Simply Beautiful Kelly Deschler
~awarded 5th place~</center>

Winter

Winds whisper secrets with icy lips
Icicles hang like fingers from skeletal trees
New blanket of snow sparkles like tiny diamonds
Tiny snowflakes fall like confetti from heaven
Everywhere the eye can see is painted a brilliant white
Romantic roaring fire removes the icy chill

09~29~14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:30 PM
:) anytime
A   Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Jan, thank you for the nice reply to my comment
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:20 PM
nice win
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Selfa Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Jan, congratulations on the win! :)
Allison Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Excellent write....thrilling with a surprise ending.....
Allison Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Thanks Judy it is quite an old poem I am so pleased to get a chance to show it again:-) hugs jan xx
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Many congrats on your acrostic win JAN! From Jean
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Thanks so much Jean:-) hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:33 PM
A great acrostic, Jan! A beautiful description of winter! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Sage Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:43 PM
congrats on your placement Jan
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Thanks so much White Sage:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Gorgeous, Jan, wonderful imagery. Every time I read it a different line jumps out at me.
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thanks James I had only been writing for 7 months when I wrote this - I look back over my poetry journey and am amazed how far I have come - still having fun and learning all the time that is the most important thing to me:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Jan, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Nice images of winter, Jan. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:50 AM
Congrats Jan on your imagery and win!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Beautiful imagery and picture you've created in our minds Jan! Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Selfa Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Hansteven:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:21 PM
nice win
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 11:13 PM
This entry is stunningly beautiful Jan. Congratulations on your placement!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Congrats on a fine win Jan
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Jan, without a doubt, you entered your VERY BEST in this contest. Your imagery was off the hook!! Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Andrea I do try really hard with my imagery :-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:48 AM
:) Anytime Jan... Goodnight
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Its 9.50 am here lol:-)xx
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:13 AM
Jan, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan x
Ward Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan! Hugs, Julia, xx
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Thanks so much Julia:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Jan, such a beautiful Acrostic about Winter that images its sparkling and brilliant white beauty. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 11:01 AM
thanks so much Sandra - i need to catch up on the contest commenting but that stops me reading the new poems - grr so little time! Hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 9:54 AM
An amazing write. Congratulations on your win! Excellent, added to my list!
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Thanks so much my lovely friend:-) Hugs jan xx
May Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Beautiful write Jan...congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 4:07 AM
Thanks Joseph you are always so supportive:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Indeed this is beautiful. Congratulations on the winners' list, sweetie.
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 4:06 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx
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