Winter

Rising well before dawns first light,
Driving through tunnels of trees.
Bedecked with frost shining bright
I miss the sight of this winter frieze.

© Dave Timperley 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Great write! I love your use of the word "frieze" Bravo!
Timperley Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Well spotted Jon, it was a deliberate usage. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless. D. ps bravo in greek apparently means brilliant!!
Williams Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 2:06 PM
This is so descriptive. I can see it as well. Thanks for giving me a very beautiful reading.
Timperley Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 2:15 AM
Thank you for stopping by Lillie. England call it a hoare frost and we do not get it here in Cyprus. God Bless. D.
Harrington Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 1:26 PM
It is a beautiful sight. :) Tanya
Timperley Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 2:17 AM
I'm told that a picture is worth a thousand words but sometimes only a few can work magic on the senses.Thanks for stopping by Tanya. God Bless.
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