Winter

How cold it is outside the house
On a winter day 
When you get out

It snows and rains,its damp and wet
You feel the chills 
And cold wet sweat

You catch a cold you cough and sneeze
Your body shakes 
And muscles freeze

Winter is cold,yes i know
But you can have fun
If you play in snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Effendi Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 11:02 PM
Brilliant write with very powerful imagery. I was looking for poets from my own country and, lo and behold, i stumbled upon this gem from a fellow Pakistani! Loved it! Blessings:)
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Marium, you wrote a beautiful poem. - Thanks for that I got a chance to read it. - (I love the summer ...lol..) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Khan Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 7:35 AM
aw! thanks..im glad you liked it .. :)
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