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Winter

How cold it is outside the house On a winter day When you get out It snows and rains,its damp and wet You feel the chills And cold wet sweat You catch a cold you cough and sneeze Your body shakes And muscles freeze Winter is cold,yes i know But you can have fun If you play in snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2014 11:02:00 PM
Brilliant write with very powerful imagery. I was looking for poets from my own country and, lo and behold, i stumbled upon this gem from a fellow Pakistani! Loved it! Blessings:)
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Date: 10/20/2012 6:15:00 AM
Marium, you wrote a beautiful poem. - Thanks for that I got a chance to read it. - (I love the summer ...lol..) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2012 7:35:00 AM
aw! thanks..im glad you liked it .. :)

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