Winter

Forsaken ashen facets
Cruel, bleak, obsidian skies
Immortally numb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 20, 2016 at 3:14 AM
Sarah Childers, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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September 18, 2012 at 7:18 PM
VERY COOL, just like winter!!! Love that word obsidian. Well, I enjoyed seeing your latest haiku. It's always fun for me to check out haiku of someone from time to time.
Kiya Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 4:11 PM
winter indeed ! good writing dark too
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