Winter

Winter was so cold That I had shed ice cube tears Which did freeze my heart

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/29/2011 6:15:00 AM

Desiree clever my friend , I too was so tired of winter this year.Your comment on husband says , no no, he was serious when he said that I thought it was funny that he couldn't keep up with what I was talking about. Great haiku. needs a ten .Anne

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2011 11:22:00 AM

deep write Desiree, enoyed your haiku, take care,...p.d.

Debra Squyres

Date: 4/20/2011 7:19:00 AM

Nice Haiku..good job !!

Ugenteraan Manogaran

Date: 4/19/2011 2:06:00 AM

WOW...the best Haiku poem I've read...7

Margeret Bailey

Date: 4/18/2011 6:09:00 PM

A beautiful, heartfelt poem.

James Foulk

Date: 4/18/2011 10:16:00 AM

I just loved the second line, shed ice cube tears, this was a very creative Haiku.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 4/18/2011 10:10:00 AM

wonderful haiku

Michael Gelb

Date: 4/18/2011 9:02:00 AM

Nice poem. Thank you for read and comment to mine. Good luck.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/18/2011 5:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Desiree. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol