Winter

Winter was so cold
That I had shed ice cube tears
Which did freeze my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rutherford Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Desiree clever my friend , I too was so tired of winter this year.Your comment on husband says , no no, he was serious when he said that I thought it was funny that he couldn't keep up with what I was talking about. Great haiku. needs a ten .Anne
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April 26, 2011 at 11:22 AM
deep write Desiree, enoyed your haiku, take care,...p.d.
Squyres Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Nice Haiku..good job !!
Manogaran Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:06 AM
WOW...the best Haiku poem I've read...7
Bailey Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 6:09 PM
A beautiful, heartfelt poem.
Foulk Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 10:16 AM
I just loved the second line, shed ice cube tears, this was a very creative Haiku.
Cooper Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 10:10 AM
wonderful haiku
Gelb Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Nice poem. Thank you for read and comment to mine. Good luck.
Brown Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:26 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Desiree. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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