Winter

I drape your darkened night in sheets of white,
Making you shiver under my dense flakes;
To hide your blighted roots from mortal sight,
I pour my drifting crystals in your lakes—
Your whispered warmth in return is all it takes.

The wind I fashion blows with silent chill;
I bury all your tender skin in wool.
Your fun, I shift beside the fireside’s thrill—
Warm drinks I set by your warm hands to pull,
Though I creep cold-footed, still my smile is full.

I hide the tilling of your soil beneath coldness,
And blight in the seeds of your barn I heal,
So that your planting season stands clothed in boldness—
A whispered promise I set beneath your heel,
While from the sky thick drifting flakes I steal.

My mission finished, then I give you way,
For grace in me to meet the gentle sun,
Who dries the sweat concealed in warmer day
And widens paths for open-fielded fun—
But not until my quiet work is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May Avatar
December 19, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win in my contest
Kauffman Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Maclawrence, what profound beauty in the voice of selfless winter, the healer. Beautiful personification. Even as winter is criticized it never veers from its mission. Such wonderful images! Lovely work. Have to admit I do love the winter season. Warm blessings of joy to you! Best wishes for the contest.
Famuyiwa Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Sam, I sincerely appreciate this your well thought out comment.
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