Winter

summer flowers spend well
                                            on.all that winterforgets..............................................empty
pockets
              wornwithpride..........................theteasing  flight of BUTTERFLIES (when...
packing the toys...
...of
...children.)............................................................................................approches winter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 8:40 AM
I love the melancholy feel, and light airy sadness of this poem, feels as if the innocence of summer is soon to be stashed away with the toys... wonderful writing, :) !!
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 4:38 AM
Interesting design that took a lot of time. Quite contradictory lines. Sara
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