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Winter

summer flowers spend well on.all that winterforgets..............................................empty pockets wornwithpride..........................theteasing flight of BUTTERFLIES (when... packing the toys... ...of ...children.)............................................................................................approches winter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/3/2009 8:40:00 AM
I love the melancholy feel, and light airy sadness of this poem, feels as if the innocence of summer is soon to be stashed away with the toys... wonderful writing, :) !!
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:38:00 AM
Interesting design that took a lot of time. Quite contradictory lines. Sara
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