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winter

rain wails from the sky the winter of discontent puddling fury tears

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2023 4:38:00 AM

Way to go with this winter winner in Tania's contest. Congratulations to you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:49:00 AM

Great description, Sabrina. Congrats

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:58:00 PM

Sabrina, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/15/2023 6:52:00 AM

I absolutely love how you’ve personified winter with such emotive lines. I can see rain and puddles through your lines so well articulated, i really love that opening line, its very artistic and deep and different to what we usually read. Original is the word. And also how you’ve written “ puddling fury tears” brilliant! Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/15/2023 5:42:00 AM

Wow, this is such an evocative haiku poem.. You've captured the poignancy and vulnerability here so well, it just stirs the soul in a heart-aching way, "rain wails from the sky" Sigh.. The angst can be felt in the deepest cores of this one.. Reflecting discontent of the wintry ambience.. That ending is very impactful too.. Impeccably crafted dear poetess, a pleasure to visit your page today~ sending light!