Winter

The snow fell like shredded cotton
Beautiful as it falls and never forgotten
At night when the lights go on
I could swear I saw a fawn

The drops of snow melt away
A sight to behold, I must say!
The bonfire bright as they sing 
A moment of silence, the phone won't ring

The stars glow bright in the night black sky
I wish on a star, it's so very far
The chilly night air, and frozen fingers
The wind gust starts, the chill lingers

A sight to behold, the wintery scene
Looking everywhere and not fully seen!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Murchison Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 8:11 AM
I love the description shredded cotton. Very well done.
Deschler Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Very well written and rhymed, Lynn ... I especially loved those last two lines :)
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:20 AM
A lovely winter scene, Lynn. Thanks for stopping by...Charlie
D. Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Thanks!
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