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Winter

The snow fell like shredded cotton Beautiful as it falls and never forgotten At night when the lights go on I could swear I saw a fawn The drops of snow melt away A sight to behold, I must say! The bonfire bright as they sing A moment of silence, the phone won't ring The stars glow bright in the night black sky I wish on a star, it's so very far The chilly night air, and frozen fingers The wind gust starts, the chill lingers A sight to behold, the wintery scene Looking everywhere and not fully seen!

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Date: 5/5/2024 8:11:00 AM
I love the description shredded cotton. Very well done.
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:58:00 PM
Very well written and rhymed, Lynn ... I especially loved those last two lines :)
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Date: 12/5/2023 4:20:00 AM
A lovely winter scene, Lynn. Thanks for stopping by...Charlie
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Lynn D.
Date: 12/6/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thanks!

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