Winter

Snow on the firewood…
hiding the warm promises
of the fire within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ginn Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 2:49 AM
You have the beauty of seeing things filled with promises. I'm going to put you in my fav poets.
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February 26, 2009 at 2:23 PM
I like the warm feeling of the last line especially with it snowing and blowing here in North Dakota today. I'm ready for spring. Nice use of imagery in this poem. Keep on writing. Karen
Degenhardt Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 5:53 AM
Wonderfully clear details and so well expressed through a smooth flow and form. Excellent! Michael
Ehigiator Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 9:51 PM
Great Haiku, love the imagery here....nice and warm, I will be glad when this cold is gone. I'm longing for spring, God Bless*Tyesha
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 9:13 PM
James I liked this Haiku - beautiful - God Bless, MJ
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