Winter

Snow on the firewood… hiding the warm promises of the fire within.

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Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/1/2009 2:49:00 AM

You have the beauty of seeing things filled with promises. I'm going to put you in my fav poets.

Date: 2/26/2009 2:23:00 PM

I like the warm feeling of the last line especially with it snowing and blowing here in North Dakota today. I'm ready for spring. Nice use of imagery in this poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/26/2009 5:53:00 AM

Wonderfully clear details and so well expressed through a smooth flow and form. Excellent! Michael

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/25/2009 9:51:00 PM

Great Haiku, love the imagery here....nice and warm, I will be glad when this cold is gone. I'm longing for spring, God Bless*Tyesha

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/25/2009 9:13:00 PM

James I liked this Haiku - beautiful - God Bless, MJ