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Wings of the Ocean

wings of the ocean rock’n roll lullaby dusk - seagull inflation 10/21/2022 Bitesize Poem no.54 Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Smith Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 9:22 PM
Wings of the Ocean indeed, bringing news on the wing and their feathers showing damage less or mostly more to the environment. I just wish that more of them had been to the toilet before they fly over our car, repeatedly. Another example of your wonderful style and use of word to effect. Regards David in NZ
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:53 AM
They can be a nuisance when your eating at the beach too. Pluses and minuses to everything!
Horsman Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 8:49 PM
Love those seagulls bopping around the ocean Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:52 AM
They come with the ocean! :)
Kriticos Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Very witty poem which I thoroughly enjoyed, thanks for sharing!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed!
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 4:04 PM
great beauty here Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Thank you, Rose!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:57 PM
When the gulls come prepare for the storm.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 4:52 AM
:)
Elless Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 3:08 PM
Kim that is really catchy. Fine work it flows. Keep Rolling. H
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Thanks!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Thanks!
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