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wings of the ocean rock’n roll lullaby dusk - seagull inflation 10/21/2022 Bitesize Poem no.54 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/22/2022 9:22:00 PM
Wings of the Ocean indeed, bringing news on the wing and their feathers showing damage less or mostly more to the environment. I just wish that more of them had been to the toilet before they fly over our car, repeatedly. Another example of your wonderful style and use of word to effect. Regards David in NZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2022 10:53:00 AM
They can be a nuisance when your eating at the beach too. Pluses and minuses to everything!
Date: 10/22/2022 8:49:00 PM
Love those seagulls bopping around the ocean Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2022 10:52:00 AM
They come with the ocean! :)
Date: 10/22/2022 7:08:00 PM
Very witty poem which I thoroughly enjoyed, thanks for sharing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2022 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 10/22/2022 4:04:00 PM
great beauty here Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2022 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Rose!
Date: 10/21/2022 10:57:00 PM
When the gulls come prepare for the storm.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2022 4:52:00 AM
:)
Date: 10/21/2022 3:08:00 PM
Kim that is really catchy. Fine work it flows. Keep Rolling. H
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 5:38:00 PM
Thanks!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2022 5:36:00 PM
Thanks!

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