Wings of Song

Tiny wings of song, Hover here, but not too long. Sip, and fly away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Besaw Gallo Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Great imagery of a hummingbird! Congrats!
Mehta Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Congrats, RAy,Very sweet poem!
Foster Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Hi Ray, congrats on your placing. this haiku paints a lovely picture. well done....Margaret
White Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Great Haiku Congrats Ray- they are nervous little guys
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April 27, 2010 at 1:43 PM
You have me smiling with this scene. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on placing fourth in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Congrats Ray on your winning poem in the contest.. with this perfect description of the photo.. enjoy your win my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's contest "Daily Ritual" Ray. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Ray, congratulations on your success in my Daily Ritual contest...Raul
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Oh...I love this one, Ray!! Sweet, simple, and very tender! Nicely done...Lovely haiku!!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:58 PM
What a wonderful Haiku Ray to enter for the new photo contest.. good luck with this true depiction of the lovely photo ... luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Great interpertation of the picture that should do well in the contes...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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