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WINGS

the eagle observes the deep lake for movement he makes a move CT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/11/2016 10:25:00 PM
hey, C.T. Great seeing a new "ku of yours!! let me see if you have others!
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Date: 3/11/2016 11:25:00 AM
This is fantastic!! :) :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:56:00 AM
- I would say without (begins to) .... but I'm no expert :) - Lovely haiku, C.T. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:45:00 AM
when ever you use an LY word an adverb you are TELLing- you asked CT- no titles for haiku they are numbered or the first line is used - ok above [the eagle scans-the still lake for movement: sky diving] something like this would be more haiku like- Light & love
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Date: 2/20/2016 1:07:00 AM
please help. should I or shouldn't I add (begins to)
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