Wings

the eagle observes
the deep lake for movement 
he makes a move


CT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 10:25 PM
hey, C.T. Great seeing a new "ku of yours!! let me see if you have others!
Rv Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:25 AM
This is fantastic!! :) :)
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 7:56 AM
- I would say without (begins to) .... but I'm no expert :) - Lovely haiku, C.T. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 6:45 AM
when ever you use an LY word an adverb you are TELLing- you asked CT- no titles for haiku they are numbered or the first line is used - ok above [the eagle scans-the still lake for movement: sky diving] something like this would be more haiku like- Light & love
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February 20, 2016 at 1:07 AM
please help. should I or shouldn't I add (begins to)
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