Wings

Rough hands feel like birch
Great wings take off from their perch….
Groping body search
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Nice senryu with fine images on wings, Robb
Onclaud Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:36 PM
such depath and wonder this senryu is made of! lovey, robb!warmest, nette
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