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Winged Ones

Bustling old fella dashing biddly bop by dressed to the nines with briefcase stuffed under his arm equipped with fixed maniacal grin jabbering to himself while confirming his expressions to an equally jazzed and jaunty westie he calls Ralph trailing exuberantly behind let's me know that there are actually still some living beings out there to learn from

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Date: 3/21/2022 12:43:00 AM
"still some living beings out there to learn from" - True. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/20/2022 12:09:00 PM
Welcome to The Soup and congratulations on your win with your very first poem Tom. I love it. I really like the structure of your poem; the one long sentence leads the reader deeper into the scenario. I can just visualise that dog too!. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Pennacchini
Date: 5/18/2022 8:44:00 AM
What does the "win" part mean? Thanks again my friend - Tom
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Tom Pennacchini
Date: 5/18/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thanks much Gary. Glad you enjoyed. Cheers back - Tom
Date: 3/20/2022 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations for your win and thanks for the entry :)
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Tom Pennacchini
Date: 5/18/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Anoucheka. I am not sure what the "win" means? Glad you enjoyed the piece!

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