Winged Ones

Bustling old fella dashing biddly bop by dressed to the nines
with briefcase stuffed under his arm equipped with fixed maniacal grin jabbering to himself while confirming his expressions
to an equally jazzed and jaunty westie he calls Ralph trailing exuberantly behind
let's me know that there are actually still some living beings out there
to learn from
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Alex Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 12:43 AM
"still some living beings out there to learn from" - True. Congratulations!
Radice Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Welcome to The Soup and congratulations on your win with your very first poem Tom. I love it. I really like the structure of your poem; the one long sentence leads the reader deeper into the scenario. I can just visualise that dog too!. Cheers - Gary
Pennacchini Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 8:44 AM
What does the "win" part mean? Thanks again my friend - Tom
Pennacchini Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Thanks much Gary. Glad you enjoyed. Cheers back - Tom
Gangabissoon Avatar
March 20, 2022 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations for your win and thanks for the entry :)
Pennacchini Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Anoucheka. I am not sure what the "win" means? Glad you enjoyed the piece!
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