For the Poetry contest "FOUR WORDS ONLY, 4 WORDS" by Constance La France.
Seeing me as their jewel, Simon and John are friends so fine Simon puts all the efforts, I do not miss a sign John stays as his shadow, only saying "please be mine". Gifts, calls and dates, Simon maintains his frontline John makes my mind and heart mutter on and offline one feels divine, the other makes me drink so much wine my gate finally opens, but to irresistible John on Valentine.
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