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Winds Dreams

my love for you is like the bright star
 
the strongest winds that blow

to the tallest trees

to the brightest flowers

standing under a weeping willow tree a stream alive with color

 duck floating so calm upon the current ,its young popping up here and there

swans with the elegance so strong

frogs singing to the soft winds blow

a place where i want to go

we sit upon the waters edge,a glass of champagne in our hands
laughing so wild to our love for each other

a little house alive with flowers and wonderful smells

i want to stay here forever more holding you in this dream land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/27/2010 7:28:00 AM
What a beautiful way to convey ones love Duncan.. Sweet and romantic write ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:19:00 AM
Very soft and passionate thoughts you have expressed with emotions, duncan
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:15:00 AM
There is such joy in your beautiful love poem, Duncan. I like the way you used creative imagery to convey your feelings. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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