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Windows To Death

Windows to death often open to me, I have every opportunity, To die without pain, To cry without tears, To take away the years Of lies and betrayal, But still I am unable, To take my own life, Because of my will, To beat the pain and to heal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/9/2010 9:24:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem and sadness in it
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Date: 4/9/2010 8:47:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/9/2010 7:34:00 PM
Yes, sometimes we have to work through the pain in order to heal. Sounds like you are a strong person. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:22:00 PM
Natalie, this was a good write, i like the ending...enjoyed
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