Windows To Death

Windows to death often open to me,
I have every opportunity,
To die without pain,
To cry without tears,
To take away the years
Of lies and betrayal,
But still I am unable,
To take my own life,
Because of my will,
To beat the pain and to heal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:24 PM
I enjoyed your poem and sadness in it
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 9, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Yes, sometimes we have to work through the pain in order to heal. Sounds like you are a strong person. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Trevino Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Natalie, this was a good write, i like the ending...enjoyed
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