Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Window To My Soul

By Michael J Falotico

                                     I once walked with a soul that had no windows..
                            I always saw things in one dimension with no room to grow..
                            You not only walked into my heart but lit a candle in my soul..
                        Now the dust is wiped away and the curtains pulled back to a fold..
                      I am able to see things in a different light and speak in a new tongue..
                               Words now spill from my lips as quiet bells have now rung..
                       A soul once closed is now open with the light from creative windows..
                             You can see in and I can see out to a man who now knows..


To the one who
inspired me to write..

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 5:25 PM Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "By Candle Light" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 24, 2011 at 11:12 PM Congrats Michael luv on 4th place with this vivid vision of the contest theme .. so honored to share place with my W.K. of P.S..your Jersey Girl in candlelight mode ..xoxo..luv..forever..

Wilma Neels August 28, 2011 at 5:39 PM An expressive piece in honor of the person who inspire you Michael, really beautiful.. love Wilma

M. Alpestris August 27, 2011 at 2:54 PM It's nice to know of how you came to be inspired, a beautiful tribute. I really liked the flow to this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 26, 2011 at 11:46 AM Hi Michael..hope u guys will be OK during this horrific hurricane coming your way.. we are having two day rainfall here in Florida but hot and will be sunny after today..luv.. understand it is going to hit NY hard.. so be safe and keep in touch.. guess u will be busy luv.. take care .. thoughts of u ..with luv..J.G. in hopeful no damage mode..

Dinda Minardi August 25, 2011 at 11:18 AM Who is this person who inspired you, Michael. S/he should read this poem, S/he'll fly.. believe me. The one who follow your poem, Dinda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 24, 2011 at 5:52 PM an inspirational force in your life Michael to see yourself in the mirror of life through creative words of poetry luv... valuable and pristine are these assets ... our eyes the window to the soul as the soul reflects the inner being with luv.. forever and always.. a beautiful rhyme luv.. forever..

Dawn Mclaughlin August 24, 2011 at 5:47 PM Oh how simply lovely Michael. Thank you for your kind comment x Dawn

Nancy Jones August 24, 2011 at 5:40 PM ode to a blessing... really nice, Michael!

Cory Long August 24, 2011 at 5:37 PM this is beautiful and sometimes we need that person to inspire us.. cory