Window O' Heaven

Sweaty days and cruel summer,
without sleep and hunger,
star's burning and causing anger,
stay indoors and feel better,
pity the workers under the heartless sun sans shelter,
mercury rising above the meter,
deserted roads and buildings for haven.

A miracle on the other side of the window,
a huge carbon black cloud,
within moments surround the ground,
engulf the sun and gobble it up,
fear him with your aura and glare,
paint the sky with your color,
defeat the sun and shame it with your presence,
Window o' heaven

Sweaty days and cruel summer,
without sleep and hunger,
star's burning and causing anger,
stay indoors and feel better,
pity the workers under the heartless sun sans shelter,
mercury rising above the meter,
deserted roads and buildings for haven.

A miracle on the other side of the window,
a huge carbon black cloud,
within moments surround the ground,
engulf the sun and gobble it up,
fear him with your aura and glare,
paint the sky with your color,
defeat the sun and shame it with your presence,
scare him with your thunder,
wipe him off from sky's face,
outshine him with your grace,
exhaust him in this race,
embarrass him, destroy his base,
come down cloud, reveal your pace,
hit the planet like an ace.

Set the trees free, please be fair,
deliberately they dance with no care,
delightfully tail the wind sans fear,
wet feathers can't fly,
stronger ones give it a try,
squeezed they seem and look up the sky,
delayed so long, i should have died,
missed you long , have i survived?

Beat the earth's dusty face,
show no mercy, spare no base,
let it know how it tastes,
when you arrive and make haste.
Watching a marvel,
you destroying the gravel,
witnessing a wonderment,
standing so close in amusement,
beauty of your presence capturing each moment,
finding self in nature's lap and endowment.
Filling my heart with spirit and joy, 
life is beautiful i know why,
timeless moments at the window,
precious emotions shared with the window,
the door or the window?,
window o' heaven!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/14/2010 6:20:00 AM
Just checking to see if I told you your verse IS a winner verse but not in the contest. It's a most marvelous write. I throughly enjoyed it. Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2010 11:46:00 AM
New poet friend you must ask for a topic to be in the Catch Phrase contest. Go on my blog and ask or read my sestina and ask or soup mail me and ask...looking forward to hearing from you!
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Date: 6/9/2010 2:23:00 PM
Hello Rinki Nandy, I have never heard of poemhunter.com. However, I will check it out based on your recommendation. I am always interested in poetry, and will see what it has to offer. Thanks for your review on my sonnet. Blessings to you my friend! Thanks, Joseph
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Date: 6/9/2010 12:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:15:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rinki. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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