Window

Luminous clouds pass
By my window
Above the traffics din.
In between my
Staring eyes begin-
Look out that window
Frame the day, transport
Your thoughts elsewhere
Consider every puff of
Cloud and glide with
Mindless care!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:35 AM
A great recipe for stress relief, I agree. I am enjoying your poems today. Aloha, Connie
Chachere Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 4:27 PM
this is a nice write.live life with a care, just gliding through. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Delacroix Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Yes, at times we just want to forget everything, all our cares and snares and glide above. Very nice write! Love the image.
Brown Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 9:59 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today David. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Drifting along with the clouds after this vivid and excellent write. Nice piece.
Rhinem Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 2:25 AM
Ps. Smile ~ I am going to fave this gem here "Dear David," because its just that good ~ "Bye Again!":) ~
Rhinem Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 2:20 AM
Smile ~ I love this dear friend; spoken within such a soft and caring it seems tone; and laced amid wisdom I find....Smile, I love poems such as this and, I love the poets whom write them ~ "Wonderful Thoughts & Images &, A Beautiful Verse!!!" ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always, to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day My Friend, Through The Loves Panes Window of Your Beautiful Soul;" Bye!:) ~
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