Winding Map To My Anger

The sphere of influence influenced me spherically
With no core
Left brained hemisphere confused
Like right handed athlete
Co-ordination on my medulla-oblongata 
Peripheral nervous system shuttered down
As cranial nerves refused to send impulses 
Failure to interpretation on my cerebrum
Lead to my confusion.

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September 27, 2016 at 9:08 AM
not for the weak minded. i like it.
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September 26, 2016 at 11:26 PM
You're tapping into something here...Whenever I think of my central nervous system, I think of some sort of malformation, and the medulla-oblongata, just that scientific term itself, is there for breathing or that is controlled by the lungs. I enjoy this because there is so much to add. Thank you for sharing...W down As cranial ne
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