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Winding Love

I say love is like a fountain Bubbling from deep within Flowing on a winding journey That has no need to end I say love has many heartaches That strengthens every need Makes a soul more understanding To comfort those who bleed I say true love reaches further Than just one tiny smile It just keeps on slowly growing And goes the longest mile Love comes in beautiful springtime Or in the summer heat It dies in the chill of winter Unless love is replete Inspired by the song "The Rose"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 11:44:00 AM
Very nicely penned; i enjoyed the read! :) john.
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Date: 11/17/2014 1:00:00 AM
You've written this very beautifully Sara! For me true love it cant truly be defined because is beyond any mans understanding or imagination cause it comes from God Almighty. A 7 for me! :) Love and Light! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/13/2014 12:21:00 AM
Just getting out my spark catcher here Sara, its a good one from your pen today
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:14:00 PM
Yes, yes, . . . a great start -- love is and love has -- might want to keep tense the same . . . fountain, heartaches . . . maybe "nature/river/lake -- deep, wild and free", . . . so many great possibilities. Keep writing.
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