Wind Noise

The truck ride becomes longer
Each time we go on a trip
Something has happened to a strip
Wind wheezes through each minute stronger  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sathasivam Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 5:18 AM
Very interesting write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2013 at 1:42 AM
Awful to have to go through that! That kind of thing scares me most when I am on the road too.
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 9:58 PM
I hear this sound too...drives me crazy sometimes though. Nicely chosen words sara
Posey Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Sara, I believe this is the first poem of this form I have ever read. Very interesting. You must be a serious student (or teacher) of writing. You amaze me. ....... Hugs..... Jake
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