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Wind Mutters Softly

wind mutters softly 
last leaf    forlornly     flutters. . . . 
my lawn waits     frozen

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 1:31 PM

SO PERFECT...SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

December 7, 2012 at 4:14 PM

I'm journeying through your haiku writes. more personification..Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

June 3, 2012 at 7:25 PM

ANDREA, IT'S ALWAYS NICE TO SEE YOUR WINNING POEMS,, CONGRATS IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... XOX~PD

Michael Smith

June 2, 2012 at 5:01 PM

Such a serene picture painted. congrats

Ray Dillard

June 1, 2012 at 2:57 PM

A nice win for you Andrea. I hope to write more myself, now that I'm retired. Wish me luck! See you on th SOUP! RAY

Debbie Guzzi

June 1, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

June 1, 2012 at 1:53 PM

Andrea congrats on your great win, think I missed this one!..David

Painted Hunter

June 1, 2012 at 6:11 AM

I'm going haikukukrazy for this one! It really is an amazing piece. A winner for sure! Congrats!

Harry Horsman

June 1, 2012 at 5:09 AM

BEAUTIFUL, to my fav.

Fabiyas M V

June 1, 2012 at 3:31 AM

You have penned it beautifully,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 1, 2012 at 1:46 AM

A beautiful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Gwendolen Song

May 31, 2012 at 11:39 PM

A resurrected beauty of a poem...love the forlorned emotion in the leaf..it just doesn't want to let go! Congrats on this esteemed win...( I have never placed in one of Brian's contests--ever. It seems my writing is not classical enough. This gives me something to work towards. :) ) Love, Gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

May 31, 2012 at 6:18 PM

Beautiful, congrats on your first place.

Joseph May

May 31, 2012 at 4:34 PM

congrats on your win Andrea

Samia Ali Salama

May 31, 2012 at 2:20 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest Andrea! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 31, 2012 at 11:40 AM

Congratulations on your win in the #180 contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

May 31, 2012 at 11:05 AM

Congratulations on your win for this wonderful poem... Terry (I like Haikus, though I can't do them)

Ronny Madonsela

May 31, 2012 at 10:27 AM

congradulations on yo well deserved win

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 7, 2011 at 11:33 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

March 6, 2011 at 7:26 PM

Andrea, If only I can see the leaves in my yard as beautiful poetry like you. lol. Nice haiku..well done! Gwendolen

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 6:30 PM

Congratulations Andrea on a well deserved first place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 6, 2011 at 3:26 PM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Andrea!

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 6, 2011 at 1:10 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Chris, Andrea

Carrie Richards

March 6, 2011 at 7:59 AM

this gives one last chill !! But I'm sure the win warmed your heart!! Congratulations!

Debbie Guzzi

March 6, 2011 at 7:44 AM

Very delicate and beautiful just as the moment must have been and the subtle use of alliteration LIFTS the words as the leaves were lifted, you're the "bomb! ;)" Congrad's on your BIG win! Light & Love

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