Asad Mahmood Poet I do not know?

Wind Dances

the wind dances through the trees
              snap and crackles all the streets
                                                                               all the leaves withered around
                                                                               like the place of cricket ground
              the sound of it was zun - zun !
              windows let the wind pass through

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Beata Agustin December 8, 2024 at 11:09 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2016 at 12:24 AM asad mahmood, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 14, 2016 at 9:56 PM ASAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown June 13, 2011 at 7:08 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Asad. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Michael J. Falotico June 12, 2011 at 5:40 AM Nice poetry my friend...Michael Asad Mahmood June 16, 2011 at 8:57 AM thank you my friend!!!!!!!!!!!