Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Wind Chimes of Time

Holding hands to keep time from being wound...
Like patient wind chimes that spill small sounds...

Life inside a raindrop where the vision is unclear...
Upside down words that speak without a moist tear...

Still pictures of forever that coat our misty trails...
With street signs of misdirection that pull for us to fail...

A stumble or two teaches us the value of what we have today...
To always remember the cold and sadness before it went away... 

We hang on to the one thing in life that will always keeps us true...
Faith in where we are and how it will always be just me and you...

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Vicky Tsiluma November 29, 2012 at 5:32 PM I love the imagery of the wind chimes - just as the wind will always cause the chiming, faith will always build resilience. Well penned Michael!

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2012 at 6:24 PM oh, is this the one from the blog? I just love t his, Michael.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 18, 2012 at 5:17 PM intoxicating lines with lovely metaphors to enhance Michael luv .. impressive expressions and my fav is last set of couplet lines .will be engraved in my heart .. JG forever is inspired and hypnotized by your momentous words luv .. xoxo

Dinda Minardi November 17, 2012 at 11:16 PM aww loved how you ended this poem dear michael. enjoyed it a lot :)

David Williams November 17, 2012 at 7:52 AM hey my bronx buddy, it's great to be back with my friends I sure have missed you all, very true words you speak of here, have a great weekend...Dave

Len Gasun November 17, 2012 at 6:44 AM Excellent poem my dear friend! Congrats! You're one of my fav. poets. love/hugs, LG

Russell Sivey November 16, 2012 at 4:18 PM This is a beautiful and a tremendous write my friend! I am amazed at your incredibly talented quill that you have been using lately! You sure do write some fabulous and delightful poems! What an outstanding and awesome piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2012 at 4:00 PM This MUST be true and faithful .... LOVE, Michael. - It's gorgeous! - Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)..... I'M FIRST ....... HOORAY!!