Wind Chime

wind  chime

       wind chime rings, swings, brings, blessings: my best bliss
    
     dad’s gift: the  peerless treasure...

                                  erasing evil.


04/03/17

Re-edited on 09/05/21


  Kimo -Form old or  new    

  Contest

 by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Nice write. I particularly like the rhyming in the first line. Good luck with be contest!
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