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the wind is as soft as a mothers whispering singing us to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/29/2009 1:30:00 PM
congrats--I love the short and sweetness of this poem--glad it made it to the featured poems for the week
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Zach. May you have many more.Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:36:00 AM
Very nice poem in a Haiku form. I love it, it reminds me of my mom. Congratulations! I have also a featured poetry this week. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:07:00 AM
Oh Bravo!! This is outstanding and I think if you havent already, you should join one of the Haiku contests for sure. This one deserves to be seen :) Great writing my friend. Keep it up... yes. I think so. Hugs my friend.
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:03:00 PM
wow very creavtive=]]TinkBabyy
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Date: 5/23/2009 8:24:00 PM
This is a beautiful image, Zach. It's nice to have you on board the soup. Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2009 6:05:00 PM
Wonderfully done! Laura :)
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Date: 5/23/2009 6:03:00 PM
Beautiful Zach! Really well done Haiku. :)
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Date: 5/23/2009 5:31:00 PM
Beautiful... will read more. enjoy your day.
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