Wind

the wind is as soft
as a mothers whispering
singing us to sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 1:30 PM
congrats--I love the short and sweetness of this poem--glad it made it to the featured poems for the week
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Zach. May you have many more.Love, Carol
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June 29, 2009 at 2:44 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.
Tugaff Avatar
June 29, 2009 at 12:36 AM
Very nice poem in a Haiku form. I love it, it reminds me of my mom. Congratulations! I have also a featured poetry this week. God bless. Ernilando
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May 25, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Oh Bravo!! This is outstanding and I think if you havent already, you should join one of the Haiku contests for sure. This one deserves to be seen :) Great writing my friend. Keep it up... yes. I think so. Hugs my friend.
Washington Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 5:03 PM
wow very creavtive=]]TinkBabyy
Devonshire Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 8:24 PM
This is a beautiful image, Zach. It's nice to have you on board the soup. Carolyn
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May 23, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Wonderfully done! Laura :)
Gumbo Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 6:03 PM
Beautiful Zach! Really well done Haiku. :)
Burton Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 5:31 PM
Beautiful... will read more. enjoy your day.
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