Wind

as the wind blows,one
acorn shakes loose from the oak;
the squirrel pounces




















04-19-2021
Contest: Haiku 
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Jennifer Proxenos

April 21, 2021 at 9:50 AM

Every living thing, person, reptile animal insect is a hunter looking for an opportunity - it seems the squirrel is also. A very descriptive Haiku my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 20, 2021 at 6:32 PM

This is visually delightful Alexis. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Judy Ball

April 19, 2021 at 10:17 PM

This is a super Haiku Alexis. Such a happy picture you paint here. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Rico Leffanta

April 19, 2021 at 11:32 AM

Well done! Proof that opportunity does not need to knock! Aloha! Rico

Victor Buhagiar

April 19, 2021 at 8:09 AM

One can visualize your haiku. Great picture.

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 19, 2021 at 7:47 AM

What a charming imagery, dearest, Alexis! Loved it. Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

April 19, 2021 at 5:23 AM

I do see that image in your words my friend. So well done, Alexis!

Sotto Poet

April 19, 2021 at 2:52 AM

That stunningly accurate image caught in time you've captured at a very poignant moment; great Haiku, Alexis, best wishes of luck, and have a great day.