Wind

as the wind blows,one acorn shakes loose from the oak; the squirrel pounces 04-19-2021 Contest: Haiku Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2021 9:50:00 AM

Every living thing, person, reptile animal insect is a hunter looking for an opportunity - it seems the squirrel is also. A very descriptive Haiku my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2021 6:32:00 PM

This is visually delightful Alexis. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Judy Ball

Date: 4/19/2021 10:17:00 PM

This is a super Haiku Alexis. Such a happy picture you paint here. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/19/2021 11:32:00 AM

Well done! Proof that opportunity does not need to knock! Aloha! Rico

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/19/2021 8:09:00 AM

One can visualize your haiku. Great picture.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/19/2021 7:47:00 AM

What a charming imagery, dearest, Alexis! Loved it. Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2021 5:23:00 AM

I do see that image in your words my friend. So well done, Alexis!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/19/2021 2:52:00 AM

That stunningly accurate image caught in time you've captured at a very poignant moment; great Haiku, Alexis, best wishes of luck, and have a great day.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2021 2:36:00 AM

excellent imagery Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/19/2021 1:53:00 AM

Can see that image Alexis, caught in the moment. Have a great week and good luck in the contest. Tom