Wimpy Lover
The spear passed through my heart
His words like a dart
Blood oozed
Pain profuse
My hand limp
I let go off the wimp
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.